So for the peer review, I decided to have my sister do it. At first, she didn't want to. Bot after some bribery for some food she gave in. At first, she liked the overall look of my video. But she didn't love the editing. For some reason, my first version wasn't the best. It didn't have the audio synced correctly. She had some thoughts about the music and the production quality. She thought the music sucks. Which it does. Cause it's the only non-copyrighted music. She didn't like the transitions either. She thought it was cut weird. But when I showed her the final production, she loved it. By using her ideas we re-made it. With thoughts in mind. She really loved the final edit of it. How we made the intensity high. And how we fixed the transactions. They ended up coming smoothly. She really liked how it turned out.
Shot 1 Micheal sits in his dimly lit apartment. The shot starts from the back. Shot 2 Pan around the couch to get a frontal view of the character. Shot 3 Slow zoom to the character's face showing his sleepless eyes Shot 4 A shadowy figure walks towards a house with a package. Shot 5 The door bell rings and the focus is on the package. Shot 6 The main character opens to see no one is there and notices the package. Shot 7 Picks up the box with the focus on the box. Shot 8 Shot changes to the box on a table with a light over it. Shot 9 Quick cut to the main character thinking. Shot 10 Bird-eye view of the box opening Shot 11 Picks up the envelope to see then cuts to black. Shot 12 Change of setting to an alleyway Shot 13 Goes to an establishing shot of a restaurant. Shot 14 Goes to inside to some seats. Shot 15 Two characters sit down on the seats. Shot 16 Exchange in dialogue about the note. Shot 17 The character gets up and walks out. Shot 18 Wide shot of the restaurant with the c...
Location - INT. MICHAEL KANE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT [Tense music playing] [Michael Kane, a worn-out former detective, sits at his desk, surrounded by case files and old photographs. He receives a mysterious package.] MICHAEL (under his breath) What's this? [He opens the package, revealing a cryptic message and a photograph of a crime boss known as "The Shadow."] MICHAEL (to himself) You can't outrun the past. Location - CITY ALLEY - NIGHT [Michael walks through a dimly lit alley, exchanging nods with shady figures. He spots a silhouette in the shadows.] MICHAEL (whispering) I knew you'd come back to haunt me. Location: RESTAURANT- DAY [Michael confronts his former partner, Brain, about the mysterious package.] BRAIN ...
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